The trouble with poetry – how we get teaching it wrong

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‘Would anyone care to join me / in flicking a few pebbles in the direction / of teachers who are fond of asking the question: / “What is the poet trying to say?” // as if Thomas Hardy and Emily Dickinson / had struggled but ultimately failed in their efforts – / inarticulate wretches that they were’.

It’s easy to share Billy Collins’s irritation with the education system, expressed here in his poem, The Effort. Teachers who try to do right by their students often attempt to cover every conceivable exam question, whilst those without the confidence or skills reduce the reading of poetry to a feature spotting exercise. Either teacher can produce Collins’ stultifying lesson, the poem reduced to roadkill. Sure, it’s easy to argue that examination systems have the potential to suck the life out of all literature: poetry, prose, or drama. However, at least prose has an advantage: Of Mice and Men might also be dead on the slab but someone in the class will be enjoying Suzanne Collins or Stephanie Meyer at home. A poor experience with Steinbeck will be seen as the exception and not the rule. Poetry, on the other hand, lacks champions like these and, once the teacher kills it, there are no second chances. Billy Collins, with trademark playfulness, decides to ‘leave it up to Mrs. Parker, / who is tapping a piece of chalk against the blackboard, and her students – a few with their hands up, / others slouching with their caps on backwards – // to figure out what it is I am trying to say’. Nevertheless, in the UK, poetry’s image problem, especially in senior schools, is being taken seriously and Sir Andrew Motion was commissioned to chair The Motion Report: Poetry and Young People, which makes for some interesting reading.

Motion’s conclusion is that many teachers, even those with an enthusiasm for poetry ‘need more support to develop their confidence and critical skills’. This is hardly surprising, as the current generation of teachers themselves experienced an educational landscape in which poetry was dissected for the exam. The idea of reading it for pleasure scarcely occurred to us. How many teachers enjoy reading contemporary novels and share these with their classes? How many teachers read poetry for enjoyment in the same way? Yet English teachers’ pigeonholes are crammed with advertisements for expensive courses on behaviour management and how to get graded as outstanding by Ofsted. What a sad state of affairs we are in when, post degree, English teachers lack exciting forums to keep their creative juices flowing. Pedagogy should be tackled by the whole school and more training courses should focus on subject disciplines. 

Motion doesn’t make this point but poetry simply isn’t available enough. I recently surveyed the collections available across Oxfordshire via interlibrary loan: out of all of the material published in the last couple of years, only a handful are stocked by libraries. The situation in schools is worse, with a mouldering copy of The Rattle Bag and some war poetry sitting forlorn on the shelf if you’re lucky. (Junior years get a better deal, with bags of lively verse but, once you hit GCSE, you’re in a desert). So, it’s hardly surprising that English teachers and their students can’t access the good stuff.

Motion says that the range of poetry offered to children is generally too narrow. I’m not sure that this is strictly true. One area where GCSE boards tread carefully is in offering a culturally diverse selection of poetry. Sixteen year olds today are more likely to encounter great poets like Chinua Achebe, Linton Kwesi Johnson and Carol Ann Duffy than the safe choices from yesteryear. However, perhaps Motion means that the examination boards’ well-intentioned glossy anthologies define the limits of poetry in some students’ minds. The hidden message here is that poetry is a tricky area for the novice and that experts need to sift and repackage it before it’s ready for consumption by mere mortals. It’s a complex area, as these anthologies are already included in the examination entry fee, whereas, if students started to get their hands on real books of poetry, then the cost would have to be met either by the student, or by the school. Couldn’t the exam boards get together with a proper commercial publisher and cut a deal in which the nation’s young get their hands on some real books? That’s not going to appeal to the boards, as they’re mostly educational publishers as well: a conflict of interests if ever there was one.

Motion also makes the point that school poetry does not have ‘a deep enough historical reach’. He’s right. In making excuses and allowances for our young people, we sell them short. They’re as intellectually curious as any generation before them. Dull teaching might put them off Donne or Pope but sex, death and humour are unchanged: they’re as present in Donne as in Armitage.

Websites like the The Poetry Archive and The Poetry Trust in the UK, or The Poetry Foundation in the US offer both new and habitual readers of poetry a fantastic range of resources. Even a quick search on iTunes will yield laugh out loud performances from current greats like Paul Muldoon. Motion suggests that there needs to be ‘an improvement in the digital offer’. There does. However, many of the resources are out there already and someone in the Department of Education needs to sit down and create a decent links page for the profession: this is the kind of centralised tinkering which most teachers would welcome. In an instant, teachers will stop crucifying their students with yet another PowerPoint and start seeing information technology as a way to connect their student readers with the living, breathing world of poetry – a world which is, by the way, only too happy to forge links with readers, teachers and schools.

Finally, schools must either get their students off campus to work with poets, or poets must come in. In an ideal world, it would be great to see individual schools, or local partnerships of schools, creating ongoing links with their local poet. We all know that the stuff needs to be read aloud but to hear a poet read his or her own work is a different proposition. Once poetry has a human face, once it escapes from the page and into the lives of young people, then it starts to possess some power and relevance.

This ought to be an easy sell. In our secular age people are increasingly turning to poems and song lyrics to mark ritual occasions like weddings and funerals and, viewed like this, it’s possible to argue that poetry has never been more valuable or more relevant to our society.

New Dawn Fades – Matt Merritt’s Making the Most of the Light

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Looking at the turnout for the support act’s set, I’m reminded of a wispy comb-over. As ever, the consumer knows best and art and culture are, after all, just another commodity. I hate being late for things – perhaps through a fear of missing out, perhaps because I just don’t get out enough. Anyway, I have endured countless terrible, or not altogether appalling support acts: feedback, tuneless, rubbishy lyrics, or sometimes all three of these get them in the end. However, as soon as The Veils fired up their first tune at Oxford’s Carling Academy a couple of years ago, I knew that I was hearing the real thing. The main event had nothing to touch this energy and intensity.

Today I stumbled upon Matt Merritt’s Making the Most of the Light, a humble chap-book but, within its pages are poems of power and beauty. We all know the frustrating lag between operating the virtual shutter of a digital camera and the moment when it actually deigns to shoot the image. In Developments, the first stanza presents an eerily spooky moment. ‘Years he waited in vain for something unseen / to emerge from the emulsion under safe light. / In the early days, the loved one, long departed, / leaning into the shot over someone’s shoulder’. The poem reads like an elegy, grief still raw. However, the unspecified ‘something’ also hints at a non-human presence, giving the stanza a troubling, uncanny quality. Today, despite the digital revolution, nothing has changed as ‘Sometimes no amount / of experience can prepare him for the way, // in six expensive megapixels, late sun picks out / the blush on a wintering goosander’s white breast, / where moments earlier there was only a man, / a settling pool, a monochrome afternoon’. The poem remains open to the unexpected; even its title suggests energy and momentum and, like Keats’s nightingale, or Hardy’s thrush, the bird is a sign of hope, of inspiration. The funereal white of Hardy’s Neutral Tones is overcome by the late sun’s blush.

Mortality pervades the collection and a poem like Saturday uses the banality of the everyday to help us to feel death’s sting more acutely. ‘So we wake, and the distance from Friday night / to Saturday morning has widened, stretched. / The evening’s words harden between us in / the bright, brittle sun of a false spring’. The aubade should ring with the devil-may-care spunk of John Donne but Merritt’s Saturday morning feels more like many of ours: hung-over, possibility shrivelling in the light. ‘Last night, when you stood with your back / to the reservoir wall, holding back the flood – / full moon teed up on the radio mast, sodium glow a few feet above – / this was a world small enough to encompass / all our pain, our fear, our love. Now, in the warm / light of day, the lid is lifted off. / The blue miles have their say’. The final line offers a brutal subversion of the summer weekend, reminding us of our true place in the cosmos.

There’s humour here too, with a poem like Treaty’s blokey language reminiscent of Don Paterson : ‘Here’s the deal – / as I am only the average dumb male, / which is to say, monosyllabic. / Yes. Me’. Although the prevailing tone is elegiac, these poems are shot through with moments of beauty and epiphany. Matt Merritt is no dodgy support act and these poems are the real thing. Sadly, Making the Most of the Light is currently out of print but Troy Town is available from Arrowhead Press and hydrodaktulopsychicharmonica is available from Nine Arches Press.

Dancing in the Dhark – Imtiaz Dharker’s Leaving Fingerprints

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On Berlin’s Bernauer Straße the wheat around The Chapel of Reconciliation was tanning in the summer sun – each blade a memorial to the 171 people who lost their lives attempting to cross from East to West. The death strip wheat field brings ‘all flesh is grass‘ from the book of Isaiah to mind. The wheat is a reminder of our mortality but also of time’s ability to illumine even the darkest places, as the barren death strip now sustains life. The irony of protecting the wheat from feckless tourists by roping it off, together with stern warnings not to cross this line, was lost on the trustees but, overall, The Chapel of Reconciliation is a powerful witness to both humanity’s folly and dignity.

In Imtiaz Dharker‘s poem When they walled her in, the wall is used as an instrument of capital punishment to prevent the emperor’s son from carrying-on with a dancing girl. ‘It didn’t take the skill of an executioner / or a hangman. All the job needed was a builder’. Dharker’s presentation of thrifty brutality creates an uncomfortable comparison with today’s regimes. World news proves that killing is still just another job in some parts of the world. The dancer meets her doom with dignity, singing ‘about lost courage, a sleeping man / and names that would never be said to him. She sang / the names of all the people who had gone missing’. The voice of truth, even when weak, suppressed and immured will not be silenced, like the voices of the Mothers of the Plaza de Mayo.

Leaving Fingerprints is a carefully structured collection of poems. As the act of leaving a fingerprint requires an initial touch, so Dharker often favours paired poems, presenting her reader with an action and then a reaction. When they walled her in is followed by Walling her in, a poem which shows the impact of state violence upon its citizens. The builder tries to treat his work as just another job but is unsuccessful. ‘I began to lay the stone / in front of her mouth, but her breath on my hands, / her singing so close to my face, did me in’. Despite the darkness of this material, Dharker’s view of human nature is optimistic. The situation will be redeemed. ‘One day a crack appeared. Another day / a pomegranate blossom burst through,’ lines which reference Dublin, Belfast and Berlin but which are just as true of the Arab Spring.

Dharker’s tour through cultures and histories allows her to use the whole collection to gradually invite her reader to view issues with a broader perspective. The first few poems explore the Battle of Hastings. In Hastings, Dharker writes that ‘Hastings / then was just a word. A name / beside a date in my exercise book. / Today the train comes rolling in to this / town, houses marching up a gentle hill.’ The contrast between then and now shows that this defining invasion of the British Isles now leaves the lightest of fingerprints, as Harold’s strategic high ground is transformed into a ‘gentle hill’. In A place called Battle, Dharker shows that the fingerprint of 1066 even touches English place names. Any scar, Dharker suggests, will fade in time. However, the fields ‘ablaze with poppies’ point the reader to the imagery of The Great War, suggesting that no matter when, or where, they were fought, all battles are the same. In Rush, Dharker’s poppies become narcotic, her poem concluding in a list of heroin’s aliases ‘Horse Ferry Dust Smack Junk Scag / Black Tar Big Bag Cheese Chip / Antifreeze Ready Rock Train / Dirt Hero Golden Girl White Boy /Dead On Arrival’. Like Proteus, such a shape-shifting evil, one which even defies language to pin it down, will never be controlled.

Weighing in at 142 pages, Leaving Fingerprints is a sizeable work and across these pages Dharker explores and celebrates everything from the oral transmission of recipes, to photography, to the miraculous lives of tiffin boxes. She sometimes tackles inhuman behaviour but without ever sacrificing the warm domestic smell of cooking. Without sacrificing love.

If you like the sound of this, then why not hear Imtiaz Dharker read at this year’s Aldeburgh Poetry Prom?

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Braiding a windowpane – Don Paterson’s Rain

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A friend of mine who was born and bred in Reading, a place whose Oracle centre he regards as Dante‘s vision of hell, got a job on the Aberdeen Press and Journal. Needless to say, he had a few adjustments to make in terms of language and culture but it didn’t take him long to get into the spirit of things. Weeks into the job, he phoned to share the headline he had written for a piece on a local pigeon fancier: ‘Love me doo,’ a doo being a Scots dialect word for pigeon. English, or American English, may be the planet’s adopted language for international business and air traffic control but, on its home turf, that white light is diffracted into pure colour by the UK’s variations in geography and circumstance.

Don Paterson‘s Rain pulses with the life of the language. In The Human Sheld, he creates an intimate dramatic monologue between a terse manly man and his partner, who has asked why he sleeps with his arm around her. ‘The reason, gin ye want the truth […] // is no’ for warmth or peace o’ mind / but that in ma dreams, ma dou, / I’m staunin here upright, wi’ you / the lang sheld that I grue ahind’. (The reason, if you want the truth – is not for warmth or peace of mind but because, in my dreams, my doo, I’m standing here upright, with you, the long shield that I shake behind). There’s affection here in the word dou (doo) but the poem also surprises with its humour and naked honesty, as its taciturn speaker recognises his weakness, and his need for support and defence. If you know John Donne‘s To His Mistress Going to Bed, then you’ll hear its echoes here. In Donne’s poem, the male speaker offers his naked body as a protective covering for his partner. This fits with his knowing, controlling personality. Not so for Paterson, whose enclosed ABBA quatrains echo a male need for protection and comfort.

This raw unsentimental ethic is stamped across the whole collection. In its opening poem, Two Trees, we see an orange and a lemon tree grafted. ‘Over the years / the limbs would get themselves so tangled up / each bough looked like it gave a double-crop, / and not one kid in the village didn’t know / the magic tree in Miguel’s patio’. Yet, when the trees are rudely sundered ‘nor did their unhealed flanks weep every spring / for those four yards that lost them everything, / as each strained on its shackled root to face / the other’s empty, intricate embrace. / They were trees, and trees don’t weep or ache or shout. / And trees are all this poem is about’. Paterson’s rhyming couplets and blunt statements actually heighten the poem’s cold unsentimentality. The organisation of the collection throws a playful doubt on the claim here that the poem is just about trees as, in the following poem, The Error, we read that ‘As the bird is to the air / and the whale is to the sea / so man is to his dream’. We are disconnected from reality, as the tress are forcibly disconnected from one another and, as a result, our loneliness is elevated to tragic proportions ‘and this is why we find / however deep we listen / that the skies are silent’.

Behind the honest sentiment and language that shape Rain into a collection which feels authentically human is a master of his craft with an ear for rhythm and rhyme. This is clever poetry in playful dialogue with the past. John Donne’s influence is felt at other points in the collection too as, in The Circle, Paterson riffs on A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning where the relationship between a couple is described as being like a pair of compasses. Donne’s cosmological theme is translated as ‘My boy is painting outer space, / and steadies his brush-tip to trace / the comets, planets, moon and sun / and all the circuitry they run // in one great heavenly design. / But when he tries to close the line / he draws around his upturned cup, / his hand shakes, and he screws it up’. A symbol of eternity and perfection in Donne’s universe becomes Murphy’s Law’s toast butter side down in Paterson’s. Yet a note of optimism is injected, as Paterson recognises that the whole of nature is constantly trying to correct and improve itself. So, his son’s water jar slops a perfect circle on the paper, ‘singing under everything’. Paterson’s no dour Scot and Rain also celebrates life with a memorable lyricism.

Nowhere is this felt more than in the title poem, Rain, which, although it acknowledges nature’s power through its ‘fatal watercourse,’ prefers to dwell on its cinematic beauty: ‘I love all films that start with rain: / rain, braiding a windowpane / or darkening a hung-out dress / or streaming down her upturned face’. Rain ultimately speaks of cleansing and renewal. ‘Forget the ink, the milk, the blood – / all was washed clean with the flood / we rose up from the falling waters / the fallen rain’s own sons and daughters // and none of this, none of this matters’.

Like freshly baked bread, there is something wholesome, nutritious and appealing to the senses in Paterson’s focused, honest, disciplined collection of poems.

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An Olympic Struggle – Brian Turner’s Phantom Noise

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English: Rowing Olympic Games (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Today, the Nigerien rower, Hamadou Djibo Issaka, dubbed ‘the sculling sloth’ by the UK’s press, rowed the 2000 metre course a full 28 seconds slower than in his previous race, finishing last. He has been learning to row for the past three months, starting in a wooden fishing boat. Many athletes’ first victories are against the adversities of local conditions and there was nothing patronising about the applause which greeted his completion of the race. Indeed, his very presence at the games felt true to the Olympic spirit.

In his poem Mohammed Trains for the Beijing Olympics, 2008, Brian Turner‘s gaze is trained on the weightlifters: ‘In the 69 kilogram weight class, / the Bulgarian, Boevski, is the world / record-holder. He cannot be beaten. / At least, not by Sawara Mohammed. Mohammed, at 26, has shoveled cement / longer than he cares to remember’. Turner’s line break after the word beaten, coupled with his use of blunt statements shows just how pointless Mohammed’s participation is. However, he is also straining to lift ‘the Euphrates and Tigris both, mountains / of the north, deserts of the west, Basra / Karbala, Ramadi, Tikrit, Mosul, / three decades of war and the constant suffering / of millions – this is what Sawara lifts, / and no matter what effort he makes, he will fail / completely, and the people will love him for it’. There’s a pop culture reference here, as the poem’s final line carries echoes of Proximo‘s (Peter O’Toole) words of advice to the clinical killer, Maximus (Russell Crowe) in Gladiator. This macho reference to a fabulous underdog injects a note of optimism into the poem. Yes, Mohammed will lose in Beijing but, as a torch carrier for the hopes and dreams of the new Iraq, he will succeed.

In Phantom Noise, Brian Turner’s second collection of poetry, he explores the aftermath of Operation Iraqi Freedom and his title suggests that, as an ex-serviceman, he still experiences flashbacks. Like his first collection, Here Bullet, many of these poems are unflinchingly visceral in their recreation of the mental anguish suffered by those who have served. However, a poem like At Lowe’s Home Improvement Center uses different strategies to present the military as life-changing. ‘Standing in aisle 16, the hammer and anchor aisle, / I bust a 50 pound box of double-headed nails / open by accident, their oily bright shanks / and diamond points like firing pins / from M-4s and M-16s’. Iraq is everywhere, carried inside the soldier’s head. Time suddenly collapses and the hallucination begins in earnest. Turner’s chosen language is simple and makes you think that if Andy McNab published poetry, then it would read something like this. Turner’s voice feels authentic, trustworthy.

In The Whale, Turner flashes back to 1970, where even his childhood has been polluted by Iraq. 500 pounds of explosives will be necessary to dispose of the carcass of the beached whale, whose flukes are described as ‘wide as the tailfins of bombers / overhead’ while ‘engineers argue / blasting caps and stand-off distance’. The reader might be prepared to accept that everyone present knew the weight of explosives used and a boys’ own sort of a boy may well have viewed the whale’s flukes in militaristic images but the final details of ‘blasting caps and stand-off distance’ are certainly post Iraq pollutants of childhood memory, throwing everything else into uncertainty too. We often think of soldiers as people prepared to sacrifice their futures but Turner’s poem shows that they are required to sacrifice their pasts as well. The whale, that all-American symbol of adventure, is detonated ‘in jets of tissue and meat’.

This scepter’d isle: Andrew Motion’s The Cinder Path

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Above the clouds: The rear air gunner. View from the cockpit (Photo credit: San Diego Air & Space Museum Archives)

On Andrew Motion‘s last night as Poet Laureate he decided to return to his old school to speak and read from his recently released collection, The Cinder Path. A teacher there had single-handedly discovered and nurtured his interest in poetry. Motion found the laureateship nigh on impossible; his poetry often stems from deep, personal stimuli and he soon discovered that his public office was tantamount to a gagging order. The Cinder Path marks his return to writing and the collection includes some fine war poetry and elegy.

In Coming in to Land, Andrew Motion has created a cold, lonely beauty from the journal of a World War Two Mosquito pilot. Technical details and lyricism merge to create a beguiling strangeness: ‘With airspeed // at 85 mph, the surging roar has ceased, and now / the old kite rests on the air slightly nose-down / and sighing. No vibration; both engines muted; / the props meandering round minute after minute / while the distant world imperceptibly approaches // with small clouds anchored like white Zeppelins / and flashing lakes and river-bends beyond them’. The sense of calm and beauty in the poem is arresting: a ‘feathered’ propeller really does spin slowly in the wind, yet this ‘meandering’ chimes with the young pilot’s musings on his past, present and future. The Mosquito lands and ‘We bounce a little and bump again – // bump (pause) bump, bump bump bump bump – / settling in quicker until we are easy. A grand life. / Sooner or later we shall come into line with the rest / and stop. Then the engines will cut, the props jerking stickily to a halt. Then the silence will sing to me’. The final line evokes TS Eliot‘s Prufrock and we wonder whether the young pilot has achieved a Zen-like calm, or whether his thoughts are darker.

Motion works with diaries and interviews to powerful, restrained effect. In the sonnet sequence Harry Patch ‘The Last Fighting Tommy’, he is able to salvage something from his time as Poet Laureate by interviewing Patch, the last survivor of The Great War’s trenches. Patch’s apple scrumping shenanigans create a nostalgic view of childhood innocence, as he is ‘down / on all fours, stomach hard to the ground, / slinking along a furrow between the potatoes’, an image which also casts the shadow of the infantryman’s fate over the child. The first two poems present Patch as an Englishman, rooted to the landscape and it is refreshing to read war poems in which the combatant’s humanity is not compromised: ‘First the hard facts of not wanting to fight, / and the kindness of deciding to shoot men / in the legs but no higher unless needs must’. Motion handles his fragile source material with sensitivity, creating human, nuanced poems which find dignity in even the darkest of times.

The loss of his father prompted the writing of Passing On, an almost unbearably unflinching, gentle treatment of death. ‘By noon your breathing had changed from normal / to shallow and panicky. That’s when the nurse said / Nearly there now, in the gentle voice of a parent / comforting a child used to failure, slipping her arms / beneath your shoulders to hoist you up to the pillows, / then pressing a startling gauze pad under your jaw’. The poem is powerfully juxtaposed with the proceeding The Mower, which recreates an absurd memory of Motion’s father in his prime,  taming the grass with a lawn-mower possessed of free will. ‘Off came the brake and off charged the machine, dragging you down to the blazing Tree of Heaven // at the garden end’. The poem gently evokes Andrew Marvell‘s Mower poems, lightens the mortality of Passing On and connects Motion to the English line of landscape poets.

In The Cinder Path, Motion’s England is a limpid, nostalgic memory. These memories are distilled to a power and purity that lifts them far beyond the picture postcard, allowing him to use the landscape to explore universal themes with lyricism and beauty.

A Watery Grave: Helen Dunmore’s The Malarkey

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I’ll never forget waiting for that notorious cutpurses’ cash cow: Rome’s number 64 bus. Locals yacked nonchalantly into mobiles, or strutted their bella figura but, as the doors hissed open, even the most infirm of nonni were transformed into a dervish of elbows and heels. Roman Holiday? Mean Streets, more like. I took a deep breath and threw myself into the wall of bodies on the ramparts. The doors pinged closed, trapping my face and right wrist. The bus pulled onto the Corso, as my watch was ripped off and my swollen ears smarted with indignation. When I arrived at dinner, my hostess pealed with laughter. In the bathroom I saw why: the sides of my face were blackened with rubber parentheses.

Helen Dunmore is right. We make the mistake of looking forward to the Grand Tour when it is the bus journey which proves unforgettable. In The Queue’s Essentially, she pares the journey to its purest, most English of manifestations: the queue. ‘The queue’s essentially / docile surges get us / very slowly somewhere. // Like campfire, life springs up – / that pair ahead of me / (newly landed on Easyjet, he / shunts the wheeled, packed / tartan suitcase / inch by inch // through jumpy fractures of brake-light / on wet pavement).’ The delight is in the Holmesian scraps we collect and in the speculations these prompt.

With a turn of the screw, one of the collection’s prose pieces, Writ in Water, gives the journey a metaphysical dimension, as Severn writes ‘Winter. Rome at last. The terrible voyage from England was done’. However, immured in their lodgings, staring at his stuccoed ceiling and adding imagined colours to the flowers he found there, Keats prepares to embark and, with a final breath, his journey into posterity changes Severn’s life forever too. There’s a wonderful play between Dunmore’s baroque, intoxicating prose, reminiscent of Angela Carter‘s skit on Baudelaire in Black Venus, and the simple diction of the poems.

Water is richly explored across the collection. It is transformative in Come Out Now, where Bristol becomes an ‘innocent city // which has put away all but the whoop of an ambulance / quickly suppressed, all but the chain of lights / slung westward across the Mendips’. The city, seen thus, becomes an abstraction, a string of pearls slung along the coastline and all journeys become one: ‘Look to your left, where the Matthew / rears its cargo of flags // or where masts chink in the dark / and a rat pours down a rope from bollard to boat. // Come out now and stand beside me, / look at the swans asleep, / tell me gossip about Keats’. However, in Lethe, she adds a melodramatic, incarnadine hue and the journey is more akin to Macbeth’s ‘I am in blood stepped in so far that should I wade no more,  / Returning were as tedious as go o’er,” as Dunmore’s ‘neighbourhood killer / is somewhere quietly washing up // dipping and dipping his fork / in the dirty water’. The domesticity of the images jar beautifully with the subject and, as ‘the dock water // takes everything’ we realise that water, whether experienced as a journey, or filling a washing up bowl has the power to renew and cleanse, whether we would like it to or not. In the context of the poem, this is a disconcerting thought.

The most poignant journeys in the collection are so sudden, so gentle, that raw grief has been unable to assimilate them. In Picture Messages, the speaker has received a MMS message ‘of my father at The Tin Drum / on his last weekend / smiling, / with coffee in front of him’. The father is fearless and playful to the last, braving the dodgy lift, ‘the judder of that contraption / with its random halts between floors, // I said I would see you soon / after a last embrace, / and you kept your hand raised / until I was swallowed / in the dark of the returning staircase’. The metaphor is affirming: it is the living who are fearful, whether left alone on Rome’s Piazza di Spagna, or settling for the stairs in a block of flats.

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Instagram for the soul – Sam Willetts’ New Light for the Old Dark

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There was always something cringeworthy about family snaps. As Philip Larkin says in Lines On A Young Lady’s Photograph Album ‘But o, photography! as no art is, / Faithful and disappointing! that records / Dull days as dull, and hold-it smiles as frauds’. Larkin’s not quite got it. Yes, the camera recorded the dull day as dull but, unaccustomed as we were to that camera, the rictus of the smiles and the awkwardnesses of our bodies were created, and not simply recorded, by it. I’ve never actually seen the photo but my brother has described a piece of war zone photojournalism in which a mother carries the body of her child across a bullet-pinged street. She spots the camera and, instinctively, flashes Larkin’s hold-it smile.

Photographers like Nan Goldin changed the way that the establishment thought about photography. She obsessively documents her friends using available light and basic flash, achieving deceptively candid results. Viewed singly, some of these images might be dismissed as snaps but, viewed cumulatively, they speak lyrically about life and loss.

Things are changing: social networking is turning the world into a community of Nan Goldins. Our phones are always to hand. We are always being photographed. We are uninhibited like no generation before us. A meagre selection of awkward poses and nasty knitwear is redolent of the 70s and 80s but an overwhelming stream of photography changes the relationship between the subject and the camera. We have never been photographed more candidly. The results, viewed en masse in a slide show or a timeline, are profound meditations on our vanity, mortality and capacity to love.

Sam Willetts’ New Light for the Old Dark is a meditation on the Jewish experience of the holocaust, his parents, his childhood, his heroin addiction and his life lived clean. Like Goldin and the social network’s timeline, there is an obsessive quality here, one that gains its power through repetition. The holocaust sits like a grey layer of ash in the soil beneath its foundations. In SMALL GIRL IN A CROWD, Willetts imagines his mother as she ‘hopscotches / from cobble to kerb in time with the links-rechts / crunch’. The poem initially presents the resilience of childhood and the child’s capacity to adapt: the forced march has been turned into a game. However, Willetts’ mastery of appropriate detail conveys his grandmother’s transmission of fear as she ‘yanks her back by the hand, so hard / the wedding ring pinches’.

Guilt casts a long shadow over the collection. In ON THE SMOLENSK ROAD, that same mother’s protective grasp transforms her daughter into an animal fighting to survive, as she believes that her mother’s floral dress will pick them out as targets for the Stuka‘s attack. The collection is effectively composed, and these poems are in ironic dialogue with one another. Willetts’ photo stream is unflinching and wide in scope.

This past is in collision with the speaker’s life. Even in the paradise of rural Oxfordshire ‘beside boyish reaches of the Thames’, there is a desire to escape when there should only be a delight in dens and rafts. The speaker can hear the railway from bed. ‘At night, I knew the lines shone / like a river of rails under the sidings-lights / as the wake of a train broke gently / through my bed; by day, the sleepers / were steps laid flat to their vanishing point, / each track a ladder back A for Away‘. In the context of the other poems, it is hard to keep the rail entrance to Birkenau Gate from mind. The ease with which this river of rail gently flows endows it with a supernatural quality. This historical shadow may well contextualise the grotesque play on Seamus Heaney‘s Digging in DIGGING, Willetts’ account of struggles with addiction. ‘I’m back in the basement, / heartsick, digging for a vein in February // as in a February gone and a February / still to come, / spitting prayers through the tourniquet // between my teeth, licking up tears and pleading / for my blood to plume up in the barrel, please // blossom up, squid-ink, blood-anemone’. Time is reduced to a meaningless set of words and the only beauty and meaning is in forgetting and self-destruction.

As the collection concludes, beauty and fresh air finally break through. In GARDEN, the reader is exhorted to ‘Look to your life’ and in A REDBREAST FLEW INTO THE KITCHEN, Willetts’s Ode to a Nightingale or The Darkling Thrush, the bird ‘Clattered // at no windows, just paused there, bold as truth / and looked at me – looked, looked – for a few breaths / and flew clean out again. I sat electrified, heart / banging, nearly laughing at such a plain visitation’. The everyday language, diction and repetition all try to underplay this epiphany but the collection suggests that connection is the key, whether it be through his grandmother’s hand, the sweaty adhesive of a lover’s skin or through nature itself.

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In space no one can hear you scream – Sophie Mayer’s The Private Parts of Girls

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This image was selected as a picture of the week on the Farsi Wikipedia for the 8th week, 2011. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

In Sally Potter’s The Tango Lesson, a character called Sally pitches to a firing squad of film producers by a pool straight out of Hockney. Their response is the stuff of nightmares (or an Orange Wednesdays advert): yes, yes, yes but will it make any money?? Sally decides to clear her head in the belle époque sophistication of Buenos Aires, where she learns to Tango with the smouldering, playful Pablo, the real life tango dancer, Pablo Veron. The sterility of the film’s London mise en scène gives way to warm domesticity and the ritualised society of the milonga.

Sophie Mayer, author of The Cinema of Sally Potter: A Politics of Love and regular writer for Sight & Sound has little patience for the studio system in her collection The Private Parts of Girls. In BREATH, taken from the sequence Previously on BattleStar Galactica, she presents the blockbuster as the source of life itself, the astronaut ‘Inhaling the in-flight movie (some Cameron extravaganza)’. The aside and the offhand determiner ‘some’ a neat comment on our addiction to globalised inanity, as the film plays ‘in sensurround in your all-beige cocoon’. The poem reads like the opening sequence of Ridley Scott’s Alien, as the crew of the Nostromo emerge from stasis. Watching the hi-tech pods in the film, one might imagine stasis as a miraculous retardation of bodily functions. Who could have imagined that the latest blockbuster shoved in a Blu-ray player would serve just as well?  ‘And in that sleep what dreams may come. Clouds of celluloid / and carbon encircle us. And outside, nothing like its photos, / unspectacular, Saturn passes by’. This is not cinema: it is the sleep of death.

As the astronaut loses all bodily awareness (an idea developed again in FAT), Mayer uses the truths of gravity and blood, symbolised in the dancer, to contrast with the airless, weightless virtual world that many of us now choose to live in. In Trial Proof for The Blue Feet (Kiki Smith), Mayer suggests that the basic human battle is against gravity. ‘Pushing up on bruised pad and ball, she perches between / the toast crumbs and the broken tap’. The poem celebrates physicality, as the stars tattooed on the dancer’s feet ‘pulse over / roped veins, startling calluses like galaxies / formed from the dust of grinding the self / into grace’.

With a secular but recognisably Protestant work ethic, we grind ourselves into grace. In God and After, the demotic language and teenage paraphernalia initially present loss of faith as a spat between Hermione Granger and Ron Weasley, as god ‘traipsed / out of your life one spring afternoon, / soft and early, with all the stuff / from your place he could cram / in an army surplus kit bag / scrawled with band names in marker’. Without him, the poem’s structure transforms. A void appears around its second page, and the alternating long and short lines give it a jagged, broken quality. Once again, gravity’s presence is felt as ‘The edge of the bed is a cliff / unknown / to those who have not / unslept / there’. Thomas Hardy was the first master of the un- prefix, and Neutral Tones’s troublingly unnatural ‘unblooms’ in Hap is perhaps Mayer’s metatextual way of ramping up the sense of spiritual crisis.

Nevertheless, in these poems, Mayer recognises that gravity, fragility and pain ennoble us. Our battles to overcome ourselves are a source of dignity and beauty. To settle for the Blu-ray is to lose our humanity.

How I became an Eliot addict – The Waste Land – Faber and Faber – Touch Press

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English: River Thames at London Bridge (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

I usually buy the new phone, or laptop first and then find out what I can use it for but when I saw The Waste Land App, I bought the iPad just to run it on. Yes, it’s that good. Eliot has had his hooks into me from an improbably young age. I remember consuming a Jack Higgins novel at around ten years old and reading ‘I think we are in rats’ alley / Where the dead men lost their bones’ at the opening of a chapter. I didn’t understand the words, but I knew that there was something strange and disturbing about them. An indulgent mother handed over her complete Eliot and I fell in love.

There is nothing gimmicky about Touch Press’ wonderful app. As a teacher, I am having the pleasure of using it to introduce Year 13 to Eliot and decided to open with Fiona Shaw‘s dramatic reading of The Burial of the Dead: the class was rapt. Perhaps because it’s Eliot, megalithic and important, I have always read The Waste Land slowly and carefully, but Shaw’s opening 18 lines are delivered at a sprint and with ventriloquistic versatility. As soon I saw her do this, my understanding of the poem was transformed. Eliot’s working title for the poem was He do the Police in Different Voices – the opening of the poem should sound like flicking between different radio stations. Shaw’s reading is superb and reason enough to buy the app.

The text is clean, yet, with the flick of a switch, the notes from BC Southam’s Student’s Guide appear in the margin. It was a wise decision to keep these notes off the page by default, as, not only do they intimidate the general reader, they imply that all of this information is necessary to engage with the poem. My ten year old self got more from Eliot than my nineteen year old undergraduate self did, as I laboriously pencilled Southam into the margin of the same copy of Eliot that I had read as a child.

If anything, the accompanying videos are more useful, and Craig Raine, Jeanette Winterson, Seamus Heaney and Fiona Shaw, among others, have helpful words for both the new reader and the seasoned hand. The only issue with this app is that the reader is unable to annotate the poem for his or herself but this is a niggle: my annotations to Eliot did little to add to either my understanding, or appreciation of his poetry.

If you own an iPad and you love poetry, buy this app. If love poetry and don’t own an iPad, buy the iPad first.